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Hung Story's avatar

I love how you build up more tensions by expanding your fictional universe with more planets, and one of them is a colonizer. This further intrigues me as a reader more into your Virteleon world.

SciFiVirteleon's avatar

Thank you so much for reading! It was about time I introduced a new planet and species. That's one of the great things about sci-fi. You have an entire infinite universe and the creative freedom to do whatever you can imagine with it.

Sebastian Black's avatar

Great intro of the coloniser planet. I love this.

SciFiVirteleon's avatar

Thanks for reading! Now comes the harder part - bringing the story together and weaving all the details into place. 😊

Sebastian Black's avatar

Keep going. It's really great stuff 🤗