I listed to this while brushing my teeth. It's incredible how the first few paragraphs drop you into the world. I kept coming back to my laptop as in to make sure the voice over was "correct" haha.
The fight particularly was amazingly written!! The killing with the pen was insane.
😆 Thank you, it really means a lot! Oh, I completely forgot about the voice over and checked whether it was a female or male voice, and yeah, it’s better with a female voice!
As for the fight, I’ve been thinking for a long time about what to do with Mojra, since she’s not a completely irrelevant character in the story, and I decided to end it this way. I’m glad you liked it!
I listed to this while brushing my teeth. It's incredible how the first few paragraphs drop you into the world. I kept coming back to my laptop as in to make sure the voice over was "correct" haha.
The fight particularly was amazingly written!! The killing with the pen was insane.
😆 Thank you, it really means a lot! Oh, I completely forgot about the voice over and checked whether it was a female or male voice, and yeah, it’s better with a female voice!
As for the fight, I’ve been thinking for a long time about what to do with Mojra, since she’s not a completely irrelevant character in the story, and I decided to end it this way. I’m glad you liked it!
I love this. Great reading of great writing. My kinda sci-fi. Thanks for sharing this. I am looking forward with enthusiasm to read more.
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I like to experiment, it’s not all about spaceships 😆